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Smooth stuff man. Great idea for an opening montage with the photos detailing the history of your setting. Unique and badass character design, and great coloring. Can't wait to see an action scene.
You just gotta get those word balloons to look better, and have better grammar in your dialogue. Your sentences sound emotionless and droning.