Here is a undead meme I got commissioned to draw elsewhere. Undead cuz it SHOULD be dead, but ain't.


So I'd like opinions, 1-10 on the quality of the drawing, and 1-10 of the humor. Anyone?

(I don't see anything. Resubmit?)

Drawing: 3/10.
Rough Mett.
My advice for this is just practice. A little more time taken on the coloring, effort in getting plain paper, and time taken on the drawings, it could get better. But the fact that it was probably drawn in...ten minutes (tops), takes it to a low quality.

The "Joke": 4/10.
I'm being critic-like.
I have no clue as to what the fuck the joke is. Thus it's bleh. But a gamer might get it and that is giving it the four. I once again request you add text on the computer rather than your, no offense cause mine's no better, chicken scratch.


...And my post looks very dickish!

Eh? what are you rating 1337? All I see is a broken image symbol.

Genejoke
Eh? what are you rating 1337? All I see is a broken image symbol.

I followed the link by selecting: "Copy image URL" from the options of the right click on it and got a pic.

I also can quote the post and get it there.

But it's showing up in the "other posts" stuff at the "reply page" ...

wait...what?

Thanks 1337. I couldn't even see the link, but when I went to quote, there it was.

Mett: the drawing itself I give a 4, but I definitely see a lot of potential. The page itself would have made the drawing look better if it were easier to follow what is going on, meaning: sequence, dialogue legibility, spelling, and unlined paper.

The humor, well, I totally don't get it. As 1337 theorized maybe someone else will recognize what you're referencing and give you a higher mark. My mark because I don't get it At All is a 2.

(Is Peelz someone you know, or a "funny" way of saying please? )

Thanks 1337 I didn't even think of that.

okay the strip.

As I play the game in question I got it, it's amusing but not hilarious. 6/10 for the right people.

Art is weak but the presentation is weaker still, fix that latter and the former will look assloads better. (same as ayesinback said)

Try separating it stuff into more uniform panels and work on the word balloons and lettering a bit more. People will be more forgiving on the art that way.
Art 4/10
presentation 2/10

I'm guessing you just sketched this right off the bat, try doing it or another but thumbnail first, plan your panels before really committing to it.

Also I little something I did from your art.