I don't think I've done this yet, so I decided to hop over these here forums to whore out my comic . Since my friends aren't a very helpful gauge for how well the series is going. It starts out a little rough, little comedy and poor art, but I think it gets better over time. Hopefully.
I make a few mistakes now and again, I'll probably fix them one day - if I can figure out how to edit pics on this site without deleting the entry completely to re-enter it - but I hope you folks enjoy it. I'm enjoying making it, at least. Can't really say the same for my past series, though I think it has to do with the fact that I'm doing this one with a tablet.
After checking the guidelines, I figured it's best not to write "PLUG" or "CRIT," since I don't care if you want to critique it or not. Anything's better than nothing. :)
Well, I'm beginning to rant, so I'll shut up now. Enjoy!
Linking again in case you missed it:
Melody & Macabre
I know it says "and" in the URL, but I always intended it with an ampersand. URLs suck like that. XD
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
Melody & Macabre
Xiam
at 7:37PM, June 12, 2008
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shifty looking futon
at 2:56AM, June 14, 2008
I found that to be an amusingly dark and witty read. >:) Definitely enjoyed reading through your archives, which I thought showed a nice progression in how "solid" your pages felt. Sorry, "solid" is all my tired brain has right now to describe with so...meh.
As for your page-changing problem, have you tried uploading the page with a different file extension (e.g. .gif or .jpeg versus .jpg)? That usually takes care of that bug.
As for your page-changing problem, have you tried uploading the page with a different file extension (e.g. .gif or .jpeg versus .jpg)? That usually takes care of that bug.
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Xiam
at 10:50PM, June 16, 2008
shifty looking futon
I found that to be an amusingly dark and witty read. >:) Definitely enjoyed reading through your archives, which I thought showed a nice progression in how "solid" your pages felt. Sorry, "solid" is all my tired brain has right now to describe with so...meh.
As for your page-changing problem, have you tried uploading the page with a different file extension (e.g. .gif or .jpeg versus .jpg)? That usually takes care of that bug.
I have not tried that yet. I will certainly work on it when I get the chance, though!
And thanks - maybe "detailed"? All I know is that Melody's hair looks a bit cleaner now than it did when I started.
...Death still looks weird, though, but I guess that works for his whole... surreal... appearance.
Hopefully I'll get better with everyone else, too. I need to get more Western with my other characters!
(And thanks, about the "dark and witty" part! I am hoping for it to get a lot darker - I'm temtped to even bump up my rating from T to M, by Scene 10. It just gets... yeah... a lot more than Teen.)
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Armagedon
at 12:19AM, June 17, 2008
i just finished reading this and I gotta say i really enjoy it. My favorite thing has definitely gotta be morty's facial expressions. You choose really good dialog with it too because he face is just priceless.
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Xiam
at 6:30PM, Aug. 6, 2008
Agh, I should really try and keep up with this thread, I'm sorry you guys...
Thanks... I try and keep Death seemingly more lively than other characters - especially Melody - as a sort of twisted imbalance. Also to make up for the fact that he doesn't have a face - I gotta tell it all in his eyes. And so, he's the only one with any real expression. XD
Armagedon
i just finished reading this and I gotta say i really enjoy it. My favorite thing has definitely gotta be morty's facial expressions. You choose really good dialog with it too because he face is just priceless.
Thanks... I try and keep Death seemingly more lively than other characters - especially Melody - as a sort of twisted imbalance. Also to make up for the fact that he doesn't have a face - I gotta tell it all in his eyes. And so, he's the only one with any real expression. XD
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Lifon
at 6:53AM, May 24, 2009
I found it quite an enjoyable read full of several good jokes. The art is nice and... solid, for lack of a better word to describe it. The personalities of the characters are well-fleshed out, and you seem to be quite devoted to the update schedule.
Good show!
Good show!
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