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Lyrics I've written entitled: "Moment"
simonitro at 12:44PM, Oct. 1, 2007
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Curtains up!

(Crowd applause)

My lustful desires come alive
As the world open its eyes
Heart and mind bathed in darkness
This moment shall be mine...

I sat staring at the window
Waiting impatiently for you
Sitting on the other side of life
That moment was ours...

It was once upon a time we met
Our hearts bind on a lively set
On us, played the roles of love
Hell from under, heaven from above

Does she still remember me at the one meeting moment?
Is she's ever forsaken me, I will always recall you
My body feels cold and dark without the heart of mine
Which I gave it for free to you... yet, empowered by love

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(Chorus)

It's a moment I can't forget
That night, I shall not regret
Love shone for the first time
Such a feeling... an evil soul can be free
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I'm just a theif stolen my heart away
Hidden deep within you with pride
Such a give, a price I cannot pay
Yet, you're far from my dark side

Our first meeting, I shall always remember
It's that moment my life I had to surrender
To your sweet white spirit that flows within
Accepting my soul that is bathed with sin

I'm in this land and you're on the other
Bombarded for the sight of together
Yet, love kept on a half of a soul
Once, we're one... we shall be complete

In love... in desire... my world is yours

Does she still remember me at the one meeting moment?
Is she's ever forsaken me, I will always recall you
My body feels cold and dark without the heart of mine
Which I gave it for free to you... yet, empowered by love

(Chorus)

(Solo 1)

This divide seems like oceans away
This misery feels our entire life
I sight the full moon for answers
I have a feeling; you're staring at our moon
...this very romantic moment

(Solo 2)

(Instrumental Part)

Does she still remember me at the one meeting moment?
Is she's ever forsaken me, I will always recall you
My body feels cold and dark without the heart of mine
Which I gave it for free to you... yet, empowered by love

(Chorus)

When these wounds be healed
With one kiss it can be sealed
Once upon a time... the dark and light shall meet
...in a moment to be together, forever

This divide seems like oceans away
This misery feels our entire life
I sight the full moon for answers
I have a feeling; you're staring at our moon
...this very romantic moment

We stare in darkness... one, yet alone
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What do you think? It has been a while I haven't written something and this is my first lyrics writing from my hiatus! Please, give me your opinions!


Enjoy... Las Vegas-y
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:37PM
kyupol at 2:02PM, Oct. 1, 2007
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full of substance... (though the tune I wanna hear. Is it rock? Is it country? What?)

Anyway I can't write lyrics for shit even if my life depended on it.
NOW UPDATING!!!
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:25PM
crazyninny at 6:43PM, Oct. 2, 2007
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I don't know what the tune should be, but it heavily reminds a relationship of some of my characters. ^_^
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:48AM
Djeinus at 2:01AM, Nov. 29, 2007
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A rock ballad perhaps?
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:12PM

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