This is my first comic (yes, its a sprite comic). I hope you guys enjoy it!
First page:Please Enjoy (plz??)
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
Lost Chapters of Megaman
Cryosis
at 12:11AM, July 15, 2007
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joined: 7-6-2007
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:55AM
Puff_Of_Smoke
at 5:35PM, July 15, 2007
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Pretty good for a first attempt. the only problem is that it's a mega man sprite comic >_>
but overall good.
but overall good.
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I have a gun. It's really powerful. Especially against living things.
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:54PM
Insane Angelic
at 6:39PM, July 15, 2007
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Hmmm.... I'll rate you in sprite-comic styles.
Backgrounds: 10/10
You used overall good background from a game, and each panels is in accord with the one before.
Characters: 8/10
Hm...you did their personalilty very well, but, there's something missing.. I can't quite put my finger on it...
Text: 5/10
Tsk. I don't like how you place thoses bubbles texts there... it makes it hard to read.
You would want to make your comic bigger to be able to fit them in, and make the bubble text WHITE.
Overrall: 7/10
The comic had a good, old-style feel about it, but it's not that refreshing. And...I find that you're off to a very good start for your first comic!
Backgrounds: 10/10
You used overall good background from a game, and each panels is in accord with the one before.
Characters: 8/10
Hm...you did their personalilty very well, but, there's something missing.. I can't quite put my finger on it...
Text: 5/10
Tsk. I don't like how you place thoses bubbles texts there... it makes it hard to read.
You would want to make your comic bigger to be able to fit them in, and make the bubble text WHITE.
Overrall: 7/10
The comic had a good, old-style feel about it, but it's not that refreshing. And...I find that you're off to a very good start for your first comic!
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:00PM
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