I put this in the wrong forum before so I'm reposting it here when a mod moves it there's gonna be two but anyways this is something I wrote I got my inspiration from MMA, and an episode of the Justice league crit welcome :)


Inside a MMA arena the sounds of Joe Roagan, and Bruce Buffer can be heard as they announce the status of Chuck Liddel, and Shogun Rua as they fight in a ground, and pound fight inside the octagon. The crowd is cheering as the fans at home watch the fight on spike tv. In the crowd at the arena a blonde haired women looking in about her mid thirties is sitting next to her daughter that looks about eight as they look at the fight the little girl looks up at her mother and speaks .
"Mommy when is daddy going to get to hit someone?"

The mother looks down , and smiles a warm smile at her daughter, and responds.

"Soon hun...Soon."

Inside the locker room, at the arena a Well built athletic athletic man is getting his hands taped by an older looking man, The man getting his hands taped is wearing a tap out shirt he looks as though he is getting prepared to fight. The elder man speaks to the the younger man getting his hands taped.

"How do you feel Johnny?" (The man johnny Maze is a completely made up MMA fighter)

The man getting his hands taped or johnny looks up, and speaks .

"I feel good ya know pops. whats not to feel good about after this fight I'll be the Middle Heavyweight Champion of the world I feel great."

The older man smiles, and looks up, with an older grampa like smiles and speaks .

"I meant about the tape."

Johnny smile and speaks

"Oh well still... Pops I've been meaning to talk to you..."

Pops looks up curiously, and speaks in a rugged tired old man voice

"Well get the sand out of your vag, and say it."

" I've been getting trained by you for 24 years, and I've never thanked you, without you pops I would've never been here, you've been like a father to me man, and a your like another part of my family, so look man..."

Pops looks at Johnny as he finishes taping his hands. Pops opens his mouth to speak, but is interrupted

"I just wanted to let you know before you die from some old man disease, that I really do appreciate you man."

The two stand up, and give each other, a grown father to son hug, as a man Dana White looks back there, and says

" Alright guys lets get the gloves on, and get this fight started."

A man in a black hoody with the hood on his face can't be seen he is looking at the arena as he waits for the fight to start he looks up to see Johnny Maze walking out the walkway he then presses a button on what looks like an extremely advanced IPod and speaks into it.

"Imik watchinik himik whoeverikit winiks weiksh shallishik usike.

The man is speaking in what seems like, an unknown language

Someone responds off the advanced cellular I-pod like phone thing, in an also unknown language.

Johnny takes off his tap out shirt, and walks out the walkway to go to the octagon (MMA octagon) As he walks out the crowd cheers, as the fans hold up signs some saying good things about him, and some saying other things. A twisted sister song is playing as he walks out. Johnny Maze steps into the octagon to see his opponent a man about his height 5'11. He was a Russian man Johnny Maze looks at his opponent, as the announcer guy introduces the two he looks up to see his wife, and daughter cheering him on. The two MMA fighters touch gloves, and start the fight the Russian hits Johnny with a few jabs, but nothing big. Johnny's coach (pops) is yelling out things to do. The fight continues on for about two minutes, The Russian sends a hard hay maker to Johnny's face Johnny ducks it, and hits the Russian with the hardest uppercut he's probably ever felt. The Russian falls to ground. The ref breaks it up, and the two go to the center of the ring. The announcer begins to speak.

"And the new Middle Heavyweight champion of the world is....JOOOOOHNATHON MAAAAZE!!!!"

The ref puts Johnny's hand in the air as the crowd cheers. His wife and daughter jump for joy as Johnny Maze is one of the best fighters in the world.... The man in the black hoody is still sitting, and smiles, his face cannot be seen just his mouth. The man then holds his Cellular I-pod like thing up to his mouth, and speaks

" Weiksh shallish usik Johnnyiske Mazeickx beamissh himki upkiye"

Johnny takes the microphone for a normal after victory speech, he says

"I am one of the best fighter in the world, and I would not be that without my--"

Before Johnny can finish he starts to what seems like disintegrating upward.
(Like how they teleported on the movie "The one" with Jet Li"

Johnny is laying in a Jail cell with lazers for bars, he is still in his fighting shorts he was just wearing, but is shirtless. He tries to stand, but is dazed, and jary he falls on something circular that resembles a bed. The cell is no bigger than a regular jail cell. He screams at the top of his lungs.

"What the hell is this!!!!!!!" "HELLLLLLLLLP WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS. WHERE AM I !?

A grungy voice can be heard in the weird jail cell across from him.

"I suggest you be quiet before they put a electric Muzzle on you."

Johnny stands up, to see who said that he looks to see an old man laying in a comfortable postion reading what looks like some sort of magazine on the circle like bed thing he is also behind lazer bars. Johnny holds his head, and falls to his knees.

"Wha..what the fuck...what the hell, where am-- where am I...?"

The old man smirks, and points for Johnny to look out the window behind him.
Johnny stands up, and looks out the window to see he is on an alien space craft in space hovering over a planet that is definitely not earth since the oceans are green, and the continents are brown.
(When I say hovering over. I mean hovering over like a NASA satellite would hover over earth)

"Oh my fucking god!"

To be contuned

Criticism appreciated