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MuriraRK at 1:52PM, Aug. 19, 2007
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The Lexcore System: a writing system based on the Lex -- the soul -- made to request from the senient Lex of the planet Zel-Varus the manipulation of the space around the user.

In thousands of years since the creation of the Lexcore, Zel-Varus society has integrated it so completely into normal civilization.

The Lexcore System is not an unbreakable one, nor is it one that was created simply for the betterment of normal society...

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Join Larc, a trainee with a fascination with all things Planet Earth, as he begins upper division training at the Razel Special Operations Academy with his teammates. Everything would be all cookies and ice cream if it weren't for the fact that they were bumped up a year regardless that they weren't exactly qualified for it. What's more, the officer assigned to train them hasn't taken a team assignment in years. Can they handle this special attention, or will the blood-and-happiness-obsessed officer run them into the ground?

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'TIS ME AGAIN!

I was too lazy to look for the old thread, so I made a new one.

Anywho, I updated! It's kinda slow for a webcomic cuz I'm trying to pace it like you would an actual comic .

Thoughts?


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MuriraRK at 3:38PM, Sept. 4, 2007
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Goodness me, eez update time. ^_~
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MuriraRK at 11:28PM, Sept. 18, 2007
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It's that time again! Yay updates!
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MuriraRK at 9:23AM, Nov. 23, 2007
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Updates + November bump + Chapter 2 almost starting!

Just so you know, the latest comic link isn't working properly, so it will take you to the one BEFORE the latest comic, so to see the actual latest comic, please click "Next." ^_^
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MuriraRK at 7:07PM, Jan. 20, 2008
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Bump + Chapter 2!

^_^
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MuriraRK at 10:33PM, Aug. 22, 2008
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Dang, last post was in January. XD;
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jahn178 at 1:13PM, Aug. 24, 2008
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Hi,

I wanted to critique your comic. I think your artwork is fine, it looks good. One thing is the word bubbles are a little annoying to read and distracting when you have a lot of pictures and/or shading on them. Have you ever thought of coloring your comic, it might be more attractive that way. I definitely must compliment you on your layout of buttons, looks professional and was user friendly. Have you thought of trying a different style besides anime? Maybe you should try to make your comics a little more personalized there are a lot of anime comics out there, and by your art, story line, or content you should try to differentiate your self. Anyways, i hope this was helpful and could you see if you like my comic?

http://www.drunkduck.com/Life_on_the_I/
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MuriraRK at 10:11AM, Aug. 25, 2008
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Thanks!

I replied to that PM you sent me. XD
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MuriraRK at 5:14PM, Dec. 23, 2008
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Figured it's time to promote Lexcore again, since I've been updating lately and stuff. XD Whoo!
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MuriraRK at 10:25PM, Nov. 5, 2009
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I think it's about time to bump up Lexcore. Dang, almost been a year since I last bumped. Haha.
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MuriraRK at 3:56PM, Jan. 11, 2010
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Bumping. Chyeah.
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