...in my profile called TEAM ZERO #1. Here's: the link http://www.drunkduck.com/TEAM_ZERO/index.php?p=724919
Crit and comments welcome.

Since you want crits...

I found the flow of what you had extremely hard to follow. There was too much going on too quickly, and I could have sworn one of the last pages was out of order.

Now that the ice is broken,I just wan't to add:your art is really really good,and you should use bigger image size,there are so much cool stuff too see,but everything looks too puny :) ok,those were just first 8 pages,nevermind

But yeah,I agree.The characters should have a bit slower introduction,and everything is a bit too random.Wait,the hulk-guy and tiny sidekick escaped the spaceship,there is a giant dinosaur in town on the next page,and on the page after "Ginormous" appears.And where did that banana-looking guy come from? :dizzy:

I REALLY love your art and I would really like to be a regular reader,but the pacing is just too quick for me to follow.

Thank you both for reading! I appreciate it. And you were correct one of the pages was out of order. I have fixed that. I appreciate your comments and I will work on my story to make it better in Issue 2.