Jeez, why did MuriraRK get totally ignored? Since the order is all messed up now I'll review two of these to get it back on track.
MuriraRK, you have a very professional looking comic by the looks of this sample page! Terrific job with both the toning and line art. I like the expressions and the cocky attitude of the Captain! Looks pretty funny ^_^
krisikas: Nice use of dramatic camera angles, especially the overhead shot. These sort of things really put you into the action of these scenes instead of just being an observer at a distance. Nice job also with the coloring, though where action lines and swooshes are concerned I think it would serve you best to make those transparent, so they do not look like solid objects. The fourth panel with the body being sliced in half was a little confusing at first, a good thing to keep in mind is that most action lines should run parallel of each other and not overlap each other. I think you're on the right track though, I like the designs for the evil horde of baddies they're slicing up and the tense posing for battle in the first panel looks pretty slick.
Here's a sample of
Night School , Co-Written and Written by Myself and Evil Emperor Nick, Illustrated by me.
Genre: Fantasy, Humor and occasionally drama
Style: Western cartoon with slight Eastern accents.
Concept/story: What if the creatures of fantasy lore were placed in a modern setting? Night School follows the socialization and education of the beings that cannot attend day classes. It takes place in a fantasy setting that is pushing toward a civilized social structure, in the aftermath of a long and terrible war between Warlocks that has magic use currently under scrutiny. Creatures from many different regions of folklore make an appearance as the "baby boomer" generation that are learning how to be good citizens of the T.C.A.
this page pretty much sums some things up, the image is depicting the "Wild Hunt", which in faerie lore was a hunt led by either Odin or the Unseelie court (RE: Evil fairies) which was a procession of all sorts of horrible creatures, goblins, hounds and hags and Valkyries, which followed a spectral path in the sky and hunted wicked humans. All witnesses to the hunt were pulled in and forced to join it for all eternity. It's being contrasted by the "Wild Commute" since the Hunt is pretty much outlawed at this point in the story. ^_^