Right. Basically if you have much critisism about the 1st few pages before they go into mario world, do give it. I hate them pages too. Made when I was an ametuer.

WARNING: BAD LANGUAGE INVOLVED IN COMIC!!!!!!

For the rest I would like a funny rating (I make 'em as funny as possible)

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Future_of_Sonic_and_Co/