Been going for over a month now, so I thought that I'd plug my comic.
Comments and critiques are love.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Fan_Service/
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
Fan Service - a shoujo romantic manga about first love, celebrities, and what it means to be famous
Ametan
at 12:35PM, Oct. 19, 2009
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last edited on July 14, 2011 10:52AM
mamaya94
at 5:22AM, Oct. 20, 2009
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Pretty nice drawing!!!
I'mtranslating Shouju coomic(That's what others claim)!!!
Check it out if you wish,It's Pink Lady.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Pink_Lady/index.php?p=624025
Your storyline need some fixing.The story is not that "original"...
I've seen Korean Drama called "Man tht Flower"(original from a japanese comic).It's have pretty same storyline...But I still think you can improve it!!!The drawing's pretty good!!!
I'mtranslating Shouju coomic(That's what others claim)!!!
Check it out if you wish,It's Pink Lady.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Pink_Lady/index.php?p=624025
Your storyline need some fixing.The story is not that "original"...
I've seen Korean Drama called "Man tht Flower"(original from a japanese comic).It's have pretty same storyline...But I still think you can improve it!!!The drawing's pretty good!!!
Main Comic
Finished one
Hanged Doll:Where does your memory begin???
http://www.drunkduck.com/hanged_doll/
Resting one
30 years:30 years of pain and suffering...Time for payback
http://www.drunkduck.com/30_Years/
Finished one
Hanged Doll:Where does your memory begin???
http://www.drunkduck.com/hanged_doll/
Resting one
30 years:30 years of pain and suffering...Time for payback
http://www.drunkduck.com/30_Years/
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:50PM
BlkKnight
at 8:12AM, Oct. 20, 2009
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@Mamaya94: It's rather rude to advertise your comic in another person's advertisement.
@Ametan: Too early in the comic to write a critique, but it looks like it could be good and appeal to your target audience.
@Ametan: Too early in the comic to write a critique, but it looks like it could be good and appeal to your target audience.
That's "Dr. BlkKnight" to all of you.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:26AM
mamaya94
at 1:53AM, Oct. 21, 2009
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BlkKnight
@Mamaya94: It's rather rude to advertise your comic in another person's advertisement.
@Ametan: Too early in the comic to write a critique, but it looks like it could be good and appeal to your target audience.
Well,I really didn't care if she saw it or not.Sorry
Main Comic
Finished one
Hanged Doll:Where does your memory begin???
http://www.drunkduck.com/hanged_doll/
Resting one
30 years:30 years of pain and suffering...Time for payback
http://www.drunkduck.com/30_Years/
Finished one
Hanged Doll:Where does your memory begin???
http://www.drunkduck.com/hanged_doll/
Resting one
30 years:30 years of pain and suffering...Time for payback
http://www.drunkduck.com/30_Years/
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:50PM
Ametan
at 12:54PM, Oct. 23, 2009
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@mamaya94 - actually, I've checked out Pink Lady before. The art is amazing. (^_^)
As for the story for Fan Service, I've never heard of "Man that Flower" unless it's supposed to be Boys before Flowers? If so, the characters and story are actually quite different. (^_^)
@blkknight - Thank you for the comment. It's funny, I know what you mean about the fact that the comic doesn't really have any teeth yet, but it feels like I've already been working on it for so long. (2 months! That's a record for me.) I'll just keep trying to do my best with it~! Hopefully you'll be willing to come back and critique when there's more substance.
As for the story for Fan Service, I've never heard of "Man that Flower" unless it's supposed to be Boys before Flowers? If so, the characters and story are actually quite different. (^_^)
@blkknight - Thank you for the comment. It's funny, I know what you mean about the fact that the comic doesn't really have any teeth yet, but it feels like I've already been working on it for so long. (2 months! That's a record for me.) I'll just keep trying to do my best with it~! Hopefully you'll be willing to come back and critique when there's more substance.
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:52AM
mamaya94
at 6:47AM, Oct. 30, 2009
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boys_Over_Flowers [en.wikipedia.org]
Oh...The title is Boys over flowers...
Oh...The title is Boys over flowers...
Main Comic
Finished one
Hanged Doll:Where does your memory begin???
http://www.drunkduck.com/hanged_doll/
Resting one
30 years:30 years of pain and suffering...Time for payback
http://www.drunkduck.com/30_Years/
Finished one
Hanged Doll:Where does your memory begin???
http://www.drunkduck.com/hanged_doll/
Resting one
30 years:30 years of pain and suffering...Time for payback
http://www.drunkduck.com/30_Years/
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:50PM
TGP
at 1:32PM, Oct. 30, 2009
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I like your paneling structure and you're much better at toning than I am XD Nice clean lines in the art too, good job! Your art style is rather cute and very manga-esque. If I were you, I'd experiment a bit with your own style so that it doesn't look like then million other comics (I got told this a lot, too, and it really is good advice XD.)
There aren't really enough pages to get a definite on how well you'll handle the story, but I'll be sure to keep checking it and see how things unfold :)
There aren't really enough pages to get a definite on how well you'll handle the story, but I'll be sure to keep checking it and see how things unfold :)
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:13PM
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