Hey i've just bothered to post up my 16th page! God i suck at this whole comics thing, anyway i've recently got back to my comic and i thought i'd give it a quick plug. Also i would like for people to look at the character sheets i did as well, a bit wordy for a character sheet but what the hell i figured i'd mention it anyway!

Heres the Comic

http://www.drunkduck.com/Emopuff_Girls/index.php?p=461362

Here are the character sheets (I know i havent done all the characters yet!)

http://www.drunkduck.com/Emopuff_girl_Characters/index.php?p=539579

any trouble with the links, just click my banner for the comic

Since you have said that you are mainly here for a plug I will voluntarily disemvowel my critique. No, "y" does not count.


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Chrl

I like the idea of combining cuteness, sexiness and action in one comic. The art style is good, you appear to be improving quickly. The mood of the story is a little inconsistent as you jump from the erotica scenes to action scenes. Although the action scenes are done well. The adult scenes aren't all that bad either, they just don't mix well with the rest of the comic.

erm thanks for the critique, it really didnt help that you missed out the vowels but thanks anyway i think i got most of it, i appreciate for now that the "sex scenes" do seem awkward however there hasnt really been a proper sex scene yet, i think once i get into it they'll flow better, also to the first guy that commented, why not nudity? it is going to be hentai and thats what i want to do, sorry if you dont like that! i know it's not for some people but i always wanted to try and get a good backstory rather than have sex then sex then more sex etc but thankyou for your helpful comments!

Also i just updated

http://www.drunkduck.com/Emopuff_Girls/?p=589826

Woot update! you may also notice that i have linked to my FA account! go ahead and take a look if your into that sort of thing!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Emopuff_Girls/index.php?p=601239

So far the closest thing you've had to a sex scene is a woman playing with herself in the shower, which of course was done before the attack of the mecha kitties. Real life people doing what they do in real life. I got the message ^^ (or maybe I'm just looking into it to much)

Either way, I'm already addicted to the story myself, I look forward to seeing where it goes.

Updated!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Emopuff_Girls/index.php