yeah, this time I made an comic that's different than my usual manga style... it's actually an project for an class of mine in college, but I thought I'd post it here
for all those who were intersted...
http://www.drunkduck.com/Endless_Dream/
you can give me some postive criticsm on it if you like, snice I'm a little rusty with my realstic pencil drawings lately..
I have to say it's very challeging... I have to actually have 10 pages up before Christmas time and stuff. otherwise I won't get graded and stuff.... and I need the grades. and on top of that I have to go visit my relatives soon. Yikes. so of course some parts of it is a little rushed. ^^;;
anyway, you can read what's up so far and tell me if you think it's intersting enough to contuine with even after the class project deadline is over.
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
Doing a competely different style~! [plug/crit]
Aurora Moon
at 5:32PM, Dec. 19, 2006
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I'm on hitatus while I redo one of my webcomics. Be sure to check it out when I'n done! :)
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Mark
at 4:53AM, Dec. 20, 2006
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the pencils are nice, but the shading is way too light, try making the dark areas way darker and neaten it up a bit as the the lines are kinda scratchy
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Aurora Moon
at 11:14PM, Dec. 27, 2006
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Mark
the pencils are nice, but the shading is way too light, try making the dark areas way darker and neaten it up a bit as the the lines are kinda scratchy
Yah I know. I rushed it, that's why. ^^;; I have no excuses at all.
I'm on hitatus while I redo one of my webcomics. Be sure to check it out when I'n done! :)
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:09AM
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