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DKR Batman vs MGS4 Snake
NickGuy at 11:01AM, Jan. 21, 2009
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here something im drawing right now, figured id post the script im using. thought you guys might be interested in seeing my process.

BATMAN VS SOLID SNAKE

PAGE 1
a Helicopter is coming towards us. WHUPWHUPWHUPWHUPWHUP. War, a voice tells us. The where and the when is irrelevant.

PAGE 2
the helicopter is flying lower, kicking up dust. WHUPWHUPWHUP!
Robin, growls bas. Yes boss? close up on bats grizzled face. Billy in close.

Page 3
Some rebel fighters have noticed the batcopter and start running towards it, ak47s at the ready. Boss, says robin, wide-eyed in fear. Trouble.
Take them OUT. says batman. BUDDABUDDABUDDA the rebels are shredded by rubber bullets. honest.

Page 4
Elsewhere on the battlefield...A soldier is patrolling, when a inky black figure sneaks from the shadows, grabs the solider, breaks his neck after a struggle. he drops him to the ground. we pan up and see the figure is MGS4 snake, breathing heavily. This used to be so easy, he thinks.

Page 5
Batman in the copter. Stay in the air or youre fired. he says. he leaps from the copter and makes a dramatic landing on the ground. DOOM.

Page 6
Snake sees Batman. who is that, he wonders, someone from FOXHOUND? He takes a picture of batman and sends it to otacon. I need to know who this guy is, snake says.

Page 7
Splash page. Sorry snake, says otacon, nothing is coming up on this guy. Thats fine, says snake, dramatically cocking his gun, Ill find out who he is myself.

Page 8
Snake sneaks to a corner, peers around. batman hasnt moved. we turn the camera and now see that batman knows where snake is, hes just letting him get close. snake gets close. freeze, he growls. bats laughs. no chance in hell, boy, he says, whirling around and punching at snake.

Page 9
Snake catches the fist, CQC style. Lucky, says bats. slow, retorts the soldier. he kraks batman across the face with his gun. He's good, thinks batman. he knows judo. Batman karate chops snake in the throat. but ONLY judo.

Page 10
snake staggers backwards, coughing. HUKK. had enough, slob sneers bats. im going to break you in half, snake responds. bats punches snake in the face. whatever. he makes snake eat some garbage...then helps him swallow it. snake is hacking on the ground. no choice, he thinks. time to go lethal.

Page 11
out of nowhere snake equips his m4 and pops off a shot into batmans gut. the bullet however, glances off a rib and only takes meat. lucky old man, thinks bats. stupid old man, thinks snake, as batman moves in, pissed off beyond anything.

Page 12
bats wrenches the gun from snakes hands. we kill...because its too easy, he thinks. I take his gun away. bats slams the butt of the m4 into snakes skull. then i give it back. HARD.

Page 13
Batman sags, tired. then...WHUPWHUPWHUPWHUP. carrie is circling back with the batcopter. bats straightens up. about damn time, he thinks, and runs off. the war goes on.

END.

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last edited on July 14, 2011 2:15PM
Mushroomcomix at 1:05PM, Jan. 21, 2009
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Pretty good script, it would be very interesting to see Snake and Batman kick the shit out of each other. It could turn out to be a little longer though, or perhaps Snake and Batman could team up after they beat the shit out of each other. I like the script though it has a really good flow.
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NickGuy at 3:32PM, Jan. 21, 2009
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Mushroomcomix
Snake and Batman could team up after they beat the shit out of each other.


Batman would never team up with snake. snake is a killer.

"Kung Fu Komix IS...hardcore martial art action all the way. 8/10" -Harkovast
"Kung Fu Komix is that rare comic that is made with heart and love of the medium, and it delivers" -Zenstrive
"Kung Fu Komix is...so awesome" -threeeyeswurm
"Kung Fu Komix is..told with all the stupid exuberance of the genre it parodies" -The Real Macabre
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:15PM
Mushroomcomix at 3:38PM, Jan. 21, 2009
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NickGuy
Batman would never team up with snake. snake is a killer.


Batman did team up with Spawn once who is also a killer.
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mlai at 5:45PM, Jan. 21, 2009
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The writing reminds me too much of Dark Knight Returns. Even a fanfic should not sound like a remake of an existing scene(s) from the original comics.

It's just a fan scenario, so I can't comment on story. But, there is no way Otacon cannot dig up massive amounts of data on Batman in 2 seconds. At that point, Snake would be spending the rest of the scene thinking about why Bats' there and following him to see what Bats' up to. Snake doesn't fight unless he has to.

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the2ndredbaron at 10:50PM, Jan. 21, 2009
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batman also teamed up with the darkness and the punisher and judge dredd, the list goes on. I like it and would agree that Batman would beat snake, but I think it happens a little to easy here.
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NickGuy at 1:36PM, Jan. 22, 2009
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mlai
The writing reminds me too much of Dark Knight Returns. Even a fanfic should not sound like a remake of an existing scene(s) from the original comics.


oh, but that was the point, sir. this whole comic is due to a thread on the CBR boards when they were debating who would win and everyone was taking snakes side, I said that was ridiculous, theres no way bats would lose, and then someone else commented that if this was a comic both old men would be internal monolguing a la frank miller. its supposed to be humorous....but reading it over it doesnt read very funny.

"Kung Fu Komix IS...hardcore martial art action all the way. 8/10" -Harkovast
"Kung Fu Komix is that rare comic that is made with heart and love of the medium, and it delivers" -Zenstrive
"Kung Fu Komix is...so awesome" -threeeyeswurm
"Kung Fu Komix is..told with all the stupid exuberance of the genre it parodies" -The Real Macabre
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:15PM
NickGuy at 1:54PM, Jan. 22, 2009
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heres a wip of the splash page

"Kung Fu Komix IS...hardcore martial art action all the way. 8/10" -Harkovast
"Kung Fu Komix is that rare comic that is made with heart and love of the medium, and it delivers" -Zenstrive
"Kung Fu Komix is...so awesome" -threeeyeswurm
"Kung Fu Komix is..told with all the stupid exuberance of the genre it parodies" -The Real Macabre
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:15PM

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