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DemoniZe Comic Book [plug][crit]
arcadiazone at 9:47AM, June 27, 2007
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Please check out my Comic Book DemoniZe.
PLOT:
Two Demons return to Earth to find an ancient Artifact which will grant either of them ultimate power and they will destroy anyone or anything that gets in their way. The gateway to Earth is open and Hell is coming. One demon Stands in their way and is humanity's last chance for Survival.

First 12 Pages uploaded

Comic Book is adult Orientated, because of Language, violence and mild nudity




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last edited on July 14, 2011 11:01AM
SomaX at 6:54PM, June 27, 2007
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* The style is very unique; good use of CGI. Did you use character sheets or videogame footage, or was this done on a computer program?

* Some of the word balloons seemed misplaced, making it hard to read. (ex: sometimes the ones you were supposed to read first were below and/or to the right of the ones you were supposed to read after.) I found this on a handful of pages.

* The different word art for the sound effects was a nice touch and made it more eye appealing.

* The jokes were good.
- I loved, on p 5, when Angel was insulting his followers' outfits.

* The action scenes were well layed out.

All in all, it was an interesting read. I recomend it to anyone looking for a story with a differnt twist to sci-fi fantasy horror.
Good job.
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last edited on July 14, 2011 3:49PM

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