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Okay, lets see...

Art: Meh, its passable. I wouldn't stop reading this comic just 'cause of his art.

Writing: Sometimes the timing is perfect, and others the timing is horrible. Thats the trouble with random comics, because you can't keep it up for very long before it becomes just a string of repeating running jokes, or just unfunny.

Characters: I know that the characters are different, but Its hard to differenciate them. All the characters look basically the same, act basically the same, and none have really been developed besides the fact that they portray typical webcomic archetypes. They need work.

Overall: Passable, but thats about all I can say. The characters need the most work. They have to have better developed personalities, and they need to become more than just typical archetypes.

Well let's see about this comic over here...

First Impressions- Nothing amazing, but it works.

Art- Very experimental at first. I think the current way you're doing it looks pretty good. I'd need to see more updates to see exactly where this is going.

Story- Well...it's a room-mate comic. The characters don't stand out all that much. Some of the stuff is funny, but it didn't make me laugh or anything. And it's really too short so far to have tapped into things like reoccuring gags or stuff like that. One of the ones which was funny was the one where 'Stuff happens' and then it goes to the end of the 'adventure'. But overalll...I dunno. It's okay.

Work more on polishing up the current style and adding more backgrounds and this could be a good comic.

Alright...

ART: pretty bad. But I can see that it will look better. You just have to work at it. I suppose you could use some background art as well. ALSO: Guy in hunter green shirt, spiky brown hair, and jeans? where have I seen that before?

WRITING: Sorry, buddy. I don't like it. I read the whole thing, and I cracked a grin at most. Try word experiments! Big words are fun.

WEBSITE: AVERAGE. And by that I mean it's not, good, yet it's not bad. It works though.

Art - I really like your style. The art is pretty good for the style you went with. However, it seems you need just a little bit more know-how in basic human anatomy to make even this style of drawing a little more impressive. All in all, though, it's good right now.

What she said.
It's not bad like everyone else says, it's just a style.

I don't get many of the jokes, ^_^ but that's okay because mine don't make sense either