I'm Back!

Well, actually I've been back for awhile. But now I'm doing this review thread starting thing again.

http://www.cardshopcomics.com/

This is just plain terrible. Why is this a domain name comic? Comics with domain names are supposed to be good.

Everything I knew is a lie.

Anyway, this comic is badly done. It's not funny a lot of the time, the art is MS Paint stick figure people who say things that are offensive, and the site design is just...This one was SORTA funny, just because it employed irony, but still.

I could actually see this comic being something if they weren't stick figure people. You could make a funny comic about a guy in a cardshop. However as the comic is now, it has one or two funny strips that have probably been done before, and the rest are basically terrible.

Learn to draw.

Dude that just sucks man.

dear god, another crappy comic that's not even on Drunk Duck.......

this comic is just soooo bad that I have no words to express it. :shock:

I was definitely looking forward to reviewing a comic for the forums, and I actually went through a majority of these strips, and I must say:

Put more effort into the material if you want an honest, worthwhile review.

Some of the writing is passable, but in all honestly, I can't really give you sound advice until you start showing a bit more determination in wanting to improve.

wait wut.

Yeah, if this had actual art, it might be funny. Half the time, good quirky art will save something with borderline writing.

http://www.cardshopcomics.com/archive/archive/0004.htm

That one got a chuckle out of me, I'll admit.

Apart from that, well, the art shows a complete lack of effort, and I found it a little offensive. If the author cares so little about their comic, why did they put it up for a review?

Wow...that's worse than my comic...

I'd have to say that I agree with everyone on this one.

I didnt read them all (and I wont), but I checked out some random ones in the archive. It was enough to make a review.
The jokes were very dull and half the time didnt make a tiny ounce of sense.

The artwork actually complimented the writing though.. It was very bland and simple. Well, its pretty much advanced stick figures and I didnt find it appealing at all.
And hey, the website design is so equally simple and lame taht it matches the comic !

So really, this comic works well in its suprisingly coordinated lame simplicity...

But it really sucks..
Its boring, mundane, effortless, unattractive, and all around not worth anyone's time. (unless youre VERY easily amused)

I'd give this comic a 2 out of 10.
and the 2 is for that design coordination and your persistance in updating.

*complete shock*

Wow... um... uh... If you... uh... actually draw the comic, take out the bad jokes, and actually try to develop some sort of interesting plot... it would be... completely different from what it is now.

Sorry... but this comic is really bad.