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Comic Review
DD Review of Button Mashers
Eggbert
at 11:40PM, April 1, 2006
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:19PM
OllieFreak
at 12:04AM, April 2, 2006
Uh...there's one comic. And a filler.
Anyway.
Art: Ok, the VG cats style is cute, but people will protest against it. I suggest finding an other art style. But it does look good. The filler style may be your new one, and that is good. Just work with a style.
Uh...Writing: There's only one comic but that was quite funny but would have been better without the last panel.
Ollie out.
Anyway.
Art: Ok, the VG cats style is cute, but people will protest against it. I suggest finding an other art style. But it does look good. The filler style may be your new one, and that is good. Just work with a style.
Uh...Writing: There's only one comic but that was quite funny but would have been better without the last panel.
Ollie out.
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:21PM
Dubba G
at 12:31AM, April 2, 2006
Is there anything else that can be said about this? Wasn't there sposed to be a 20 strip long comic rule? All I can say is that the first comic is copying VGcats, I didn't really get the joke, the filler is way too oversized and all pixely and gaming comics are just so boring and unoriginal. I really think you should wait to have more comics before asking for a review, you're not gonna get any good crits with 1 strip and a filler.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:17PM
Anonymous
at 3:31AM, April 2, 2006
There really is nothing left to say about this. Copying other comics is good for practicing but not basing your entire omic aroung. You could habe at least changed their colours. Nice shading though.
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:53AM
Jakob
at 4:25AM, April 2, 2006
I think that it's impossible to review a comic with one page and one filler, especially when the main character looks exactly like the one in another comic. But I must say that the joke is rather good. Oh, and a picture of the size of that filler isn't prefered. Even if it's so that "you could get the full detail".
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:06PM
ccs1989
at 7:26AM, April 2, 2006
I'd have to agree. 1 comic page + one filler (excuse me, one oversized filler) does not make a good comic to review. I mean, we all like VG Cats, but going around blatantly copying them isn't going to do you any good. Nope, not at all.
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last edited on July 14, 2011 11:37AM
Shyguy_Rising
at 10:00AM, April 2, 2006
Not enough comics to really judge it, but same as everyone else, you need to drop the VG Cats art style. And the last panel of the first comic ruined the joke completely. That second thing is huge. O_o
It could be something, but originality's gonna determine that for sure.
Rating: 5.5/10
-Shyguy_Rising
It could be something, but originality's gonna determine that for sure.
Rating: 5.5/10
-Shyguy_Rising
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:35PM
Terminal
at 12:23PM, April 2, 2006
Make a check, input "Games" into the search feature of DrunkDuck and what you get? 63 comics, minus one Cops and Robbers, And there's probably more.
The comic game genre is like the sprite comic genre, only one is better made an is usually funny. Now you can't go ripping people styles off, for one it's wrong. Two of all, you get called an imposter, flammed by the mindless fanboys of the comic whose art style you ripped off. Don't believe me? Check out The Disasterpiece. (Comic is not even online anymore)
Now, the bad: your characters look stiff, which is the cause of that shadow, that last panel which ruined everything by breaking the fourth wall, and your pages are oversized. The writing is okay, but that last panel. Everything goes back to that last panel. Never break the fourth wall unless you truly find it is neccesary. Or you got some cool, kick-ass joke that's never been told. Then it's okay.
So what's there to be? You got potential, try again. With a new concept and new characters. Something good may come out.
Ny the way, you said you couldn't access the TOS of DD. Here's what your looking for.
There is no rule on swearing. Just don't make it excessive.
myxomatosis final score: n/a
(sorry I can't rate this)
.: Myxomatosis :.
The comic game genre is like the sprite comic genre, only one is better made an is usually funny. Now you can't go ripping people styles off, for one it's wrong. Two of all, you get called an imposter, flammed by the mindless fanboys of the comic whose art style you ripped off. Don't believe me? Check out The Disasterpiece. (Comic is not even online anymore)
Now, the bad: your characters look stiff, which is the cause of that shadow, that last panel which ruined everything by breaking the fourth wall, and your pages are oversized. The writing is okay, but that last panel. Everything goes back to that last panel. Never break the fourth wall unless you truly find it is neccesary. Or you got some cool, kick-ass joke that's never been told. Then it's okay.
So what's there to be? You got potential, try again. With a new concept and new characters. Something good may come out.
Ny the way, you said you couldn't access the TOS of DD. Here's what your looking for.
drunkduck terms of service
Drunk Duck is a great place for hosting your comics. It is a wonderful community that will welcome you with open arms and treat you with respect.
Great communities however do not spring from thin air. In order to foster a respectful, welcoming and creative community, we kindly ask that users do not engage in trollish behavior. This includes forum flames, disrespectful behavior to other members and flame baiting. Users who do engage in such behaviors will be suspended/removed and eventually banned. Should there be any personal disagreements or concerns between members, we ask that the users involved resolve the matter privately.
Drunk Duck has no interest in wantonly oppressing or interfering with a user's artistic pursuits. While you are perfectly in your right to say what you want and exercise your freedom of speech, please bear in mind that Drunk Duck is privately owned and operated. In other words, it is not a public access site and the administrative team will modify or take down content if necessary.
That said, you are pretty much able to do anything you want with your comic account. Just follow these rules:
a. Don't disrespect your comic host (Drunk Duck). Constructive criticisms are welcomed but don't bite the hand that feeds you.
b. Don't disrespect your (Drunk Duck) community members.
c. If you use artwork without permission of its creator, and that person complains to the administrators, we will remove the offensive file. If you continue to do this, we will delete your account.
d. If you find someone is using your artwork without permission and would like to see it stop, do not hesitate to contact an administrator for help. Do not begin a flame war with the offending user.
e. Provide a link back on your page to DD
f. Understand that Administrators reserve the right to remove your account for the reasons above.
There is no rule on swearing. Just don't make it excessive.
myxomatosis final score: n/a
(sorry I can't rate this)
.: Myxomatosis :.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:09PM
jgib99
at 9:13PM, April 2, 2006
One Page, and the world's largest filler page!!!!
I agree with everyone else. The one page is seriously biting off of VGCats.
I can't even give this a rating.
All I can suggest is to try to keep drawing and try to find your own style. Not someone elses.
I agree with everyone else. The one page is seriously biting off of VGCats.
I can't even give this a rating.
All I can suggest is to try to keep drawing and try to find your own style. Not someone elses.
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last edited on July 14, 2011 1:07PM
Eggbert
at 10:16PM, April 2, 2006
Oh. I'm really sorry guys, I didn't even check to see how many pages this had before I put it up.
Well. Review over.
Well. Review over.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:19PM
Eggbert
at 4:51AM, April 3, 2006
I deleted all the stupid out of this thread.
DubbaG, shut up.
PoisonedV, start using actual words instead of capitalized internet speech.
Tater Salad, don't make useless posts about yourself.
Now like I've said so many times before, if anyone makes another post in this thread that isn't a review, I will lock this thread.
Thank you and play nice.
EDIT: Happy now PoisonedV? Stop making useless posts.
DubbaG, shut up.
PoisonedV, start using actual words instead of capitalized internet speech.
Tater Salad, don't make useless posts about yourself.
Now like I've said so many times before, if anyone makes another post in this thread that isn't a review, I will lock this thread.
Thank you and play nice.
EDIT: Happy now PoisonedV? Stop making useless posts.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:19PM
Eggbert
at 3:44PM, April 3, 2006
Okay, that was technically a review.
Anyways, I think that's all that can be said about this comic.
Thread over.
Anyways, I think that's all that can be said about this comic.
Thread over.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:19PM
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