I have to say that I liked this comic a lot! :) I didn't find much that burdened me.
ARTWORK:
I have to say that the artwork was very exceptional. Though the inking was a little messed up in the beginning, the artist definitely fixed it in the end. The style, being a little fun, cartoon/manga kind of thing, was fantastic as well. It really worked, with the plot revolving around a ninja girl. It kind of reminded me of something you'd see in an eastern-inspired western cartoon. Nice!
I have to say, though, that I didn't like the halftone-shades too much. I thought it was a good idea to add some extra tones in there, but it would have probably been better without. For example, in this comic:
http://www.drunkduck.com/KERSLASH/index.php?p=357090
The tones kind of take away the smooth look that you want with a manga-inspired style. Especially in the fat guy's necklace, it makes the beads look flatter, and not round.
I can see that you didn't put halftones in the last two pages, and it shows a HUGE improvement when you add gray tones instead:
http://www.drunkduck.com/KERSLASH/index.php?p=464442
http://www.drunkduck.com/KERSLASH/index.php?p=464444
I think it looks more like a manga this way, and MUCH more smooth. :)
Overall, the art is an
A+. It shows talent and promise, no doubt.
STORY:
Let's be honest. The ninja thing is a little overplayed in these parts of the internet, no? But I do have to say, the story was extremely enjoyable. It's got more thought put into it than the average ninja story, to say the least. The characters, though you kinda threw me off with a ninja, a viking, a sorcerer, and a... um... sky pirate...? ... In the same story, they all sort of reflect their own stories and it interests me to see what those stories are. Though, I have to say, it's got kind of a disorganized sense, with all of those crazy characters just thrown in there and not much purpose for each of them.
It seems that KERSLASH kind of has it's own little world, where any abnormal kind of person can go to this one art college. It makes the comic much more interesting than it already is. It makes me want to find out more about this world and, in a way, compare it to my own. It's a world where anything can happen, in a sense, and a world that many people dream about, right? Overall, the story is very interesting and creative... but the characters are a little disorganized and pretty much just tossed into the story.... I give the story an
A-
OVERALL:
Overall, KERSLASH is a great read with tons of promise and talent. The work that was put into the artwork and the writing shows dedication, effort, and quality. It's hard to find great webcomics on the internet these days with all of the hussle and bussle, and KERSLASH makes it easy. A job well done for the author/artist!
All in all, KERSLASH deserves a big, fat
A slapped in it's face. Congratulations! :)