Well, This is my first time Im posting here ^^ Im still new to webcomics, well comics in general. I only have an 18 page onshot printed comic. This one "My Lady" is my first web comic, and my second comic. its only about 4-6 chapters, right now, I'v posted chapter 1 full and have done up to ch.2.

My main thing is my english, then comes everything else. My drawing skills is not awesome, but Im proud and I do my best. I still dont know how to us DD, but Im trying.

http://www.drunkduck.com/My_Lady/

That's how it's done if you want to be uber-fancy and not have a big ol' url in your post. Just replace the "{}" with "".

Thanks I fixed it!

Awesome work.

I can't wait to see more. :)

not sure if this is allowed but just to get more to click ^^

Faved! Totally faved!

Even though the art isn't the best in the world (It's still by no means bad, in fact it's really rather good), and there are some spelling and grammar errors....I have to say that the story telling in this comic is top notch! Absolutely brilliant pacing, clear narrative, cleanly arranged pages and panels, they all make it a really pleasurable reading experience.

Just work on the anatomy a little bit to improve how the characters look and allow more dynamic angles and poses when needed, and give us some more background and environment shots. Throw in the occasional establishing long shot to establish place, and put in some more background details from time to time. I can see this being really good. I love how the heroine isn't super skinny, but is still cute, and the characters so far are well written. Slow down when you're writing the dialogue a bit, and read it through to check for errors before you post pages, maybe get a friend to look at it to double check.
Good work.

you want a critique on this comic, but i'm am sorry to tell you tht i cannot give you one. i faved your comic and love it and see nothing worth critiqing about because it is good

thank you all! yeah, I have to work on some key issues to work on ^^
I'll make sure to add more BG in the following chapters. I'm now having my bro prof read my work and another friend checking on the grammar.

thanks for the favs!