Hey everyone... I am somewhat shy about this (and a little scared as to what I am going to receive), but I finally gathered up the nerve to post in this forum :/

Anyway, Wolf is my very, very first comic... and I would like to hear what you guys think of it. What I can improve, things I should keep in mind... anything that helps, really. Because I have never read any sort of tutorial or guidebook on how to make a comic (I write books for a living among other things)- so this is all instinct. And lots of fun doing it, I have to add.

Thanks!

Hey there again. Just posting to say that I have tried a new lettering- it looks a bit odd to me, but it may just be more appealing to the readers. So if you feel like it, please have a look and tell me :)

Bot bad! The text still isn;t exactly right, but it's deinitely clear in that version.
Personally, I think I like the look of the hand lettering, but it's too blury. If you could ensure the hand lettering stayed completely clean and clear that'd be the best solouting because you're actually pretty good and hand lettering!
That's pretty rare :)