Here for 2 comics of mine actually...

The first one's a new comic I made. I did it especially so I could improve, so I could use quite some critism. doujinshi improvement
If you could leave some critism here or in the comments of the comic it would be greatly appriciated.

The second one is an older comic. One year old really. The 24th of Januari was it's B-day and soon I will reach 40 pages too. :) acceptance
I should probably warn you though. It's an Invader Zim fan comic and it contains shounen ai between Zim and Dib.

I hope to hear some nice crits. thanks in advance.