That's about as creative as I get with titles. ;) Although perhaps I shouldn't call this a 'sketch' as such.




I'm committed to my current comic, but always have about three or four more stories in my head at the same time (I suspect this isn't unusual). This is a result of giving into the urge to do some concepts for one of these.

A first try at drawing bullet holes. Any suggestions for how I can improve on them?

The bullet holes look fine to me. The coloring, mainly on the hair and shirt, seems a bit too bright with the all black background IMO.

Hmm food for thought. I think I might play with those colours a bit. It probably doesn't help that the original lineart was a medium-dark blue so the black background might be sapping it a bit.

Thanks, BlkKnight.

I didn't have trouble with the light colors...and I thought the work here was pretty sharp--so I checked out you book. My only complaint is that the colors are so dark I can hardly see the action at all. This may be the color settings on my comp, but I surf and work on the Duck a lot, and overly saturated colors usually aren't an issue. I'll check back from time to time. Keep up the work!