Just created a new comic strip called Shoeless. The story follow two friends, Amy and Jean, as they discover what it really means to be an individual.

pretty nice art man. keep it up bro!

I think it looks good.
I didn't really read it. Anime style turns me off to even reading comics sometimes.
The art is nice, though it needs inking of sorts.
But good start!

I like it, but your artwork deserves better than just being in pencil like that. Since you're not using the pencil for shading or anything, you may as well ink it really, it'd look bolder, more professional and cleaner. Since you have such a clean line style, it would really suit your way of drawing, and you'd get more readers because it'd stand out more and look like you've put more effort in.

Darth Mongoose
I like it, but your artwork deserves better than just being in pencil like that. Since you're not using the pencil for shading or anything, you may as well ink it really, it'd look bolder, more professional and cleaner. Since you have such a clean line style, it would really suit your way of drawing, and you'd get more readers because it'd stand out more and look like you've put more effort in.

Thanks. I'm working on revising it.