I just did this for fun, it's inspired by a lot of different mangas and stories. Nothing big. I'm told the character resembles another character, so if anyone actually likes the comic I'll prolly just go back and redraw her to look different.













I'd like to know what you guys think of this, if I went ahead and made this into a webcomic do you think you'd read it? Etc. If you know any other forums I might could post this to get advice I'd appreciate it. Thanks. ^_^

>_> forgot to put plug/crit in the title, oh well. =]

I like it and would definately follow it, if you decided to release it as a webcomic.

I like the 'darker' style and the main character reminds me of Rukia from Bleach...

Only thing I would say is that there's a lot of similar comics about, with similar themes to what I think you're aiming at, so you might want to look into something that can differentiate you from them.

But yeah, definately keep at it.