Hello everyone. Could someone look at my comic and tell me what you think so far. I only have a few pages so far but I want some opinions thanks!


http://www.drunkduck.com/Skelton_the_Dead_Warrior/

Put a link in the post so people can find your comic easily.

It has an interesting look, not sure if I like it though but as long as the story telling is good it won't matter too much.

the quarrel scene is pretty well done.

Pretty pretty please read the forum descriptions before posting. Imagine if everyone with a comic made a thread advertising it in general discussion...I don't imagine there'd be many real discussions going on!

This sort of thing belongs in "Hey Everyone Look What I Did! "

I thought I was going to get some free beauty tips.

now i am sad.

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Edit: Some housekeeper took this thread from General and re-located it to the correct forum. and now my post looks even stupider.

BUT!!! I did do something! Check out the link "submission rules here" in my sig! We have a try-out :)

Aaaand yet again, Ayes takes the "Hey, look what I did" theme a little too seriously. ;)

Ally Haert
Aaaand yet again, Ayes takes the "Hey, look what I did" theme a little too seriously. ;)

Too true! I get way too excited when somebody responds. Therefore! ergo! and such ease of legal: The next time I post here is when I have woven together the dozens of recording bites into one radio play - it will be so awesome the word will have to be respelled ayesome.

but only if those bites keep coming in.

Skelton the dead Warrior

Thong r em make link for you, not that anyone ever thanks me when I do.

And I commented on every page of your comic so you can read what I thought.

Can figure what Skelton has to do with the story yet, and I think your foreground doesn't stand out from your background. I think that's just this kind of art work. With so many different kinds of art on the duck I can't tell if that's how you want it, or if it's something you need to work on.

I wish I had your art skills.