I'm gonna post some of me work up here and if you spot anything you don't like lemme hear it!

Comic:
http://www.drunkduck.com/GUILE/index.php?p=491215

Misc Artwork:

Did this for a "daily sketch group" 2 hours photoshopCS3



mecha pic 3 hours photoshopCS3




Images are currently WIP

Well first off, it is impossible to crit your comic with 10 pages... it would be better with 20 or more pages, to get an idea of the story and if the art style is continuous with in the pages.

But, I can tell you I faved it, and I think the art is stupendous!!! simple yet very eye pleasing!

I will visit your comic as often as I can, and will be letting you know how you are doing!

Corey

It's nice art, but your story is so far into its infancy I cannot make any judgment on it.

Your miscellaneous artwork made me click that link!

My preference is definitely for the style of the earlier pages, especially the detailed, shaded look of page 3 in particular. Though I'm just a layman and don't do digital art, I feel that the dotted or checked filters in later pages distracted my eyes from your lineart, which is often dynamic on its own. The anatomy is sound and you render the characters' body positions really well; backgrounds are occasionally minimalistic but always serviceable. It's too early to say anything about the story, but if you were to make another crit thread next month it would probably be remarked on then. Good luck!

thanks guys for your input.(Ochitsukanai, you were especially helpful) I should have been clearer on what I wanted from this forum. I wanted comments on the art only at this stage as I'm well aware the story has only just started. But I do appreciate your input and will take everything on-board. :D