Yay new comic from me :P

www.drunkduck.com/androgynous

It's a slightly girly comic without being to overboard on the cheese.

Main character Devin is just one of the guys, and although she enjoys the physical side of any relationship she can seem to connect to anyone on that deeper level.

An extreme version of the quest many of us are on.

Hey there!

I have one praise and one criticism about Androgynous so far.
The praise: My gosh, you DO use a lot of screentones. I'm completely ignorant of those, and yours look very nicely done, so hats off to you for that.

The crit: Um...nothing much is happening -_-
You make like one or two panels every page, and it's not like they're packed with action or dialogue. It's your comic, and you're free to do it however you like, but as a reader, it gives me an impression of something that goes slooooowly.
My humble opinion is that you should make the story advance a tiny tiny bit on each page.
Perhaps you should have waited to make this topic til you had some more pages and we could tell just what kind of a tale we can expect. :)

Either way, good luck, and keep it up! It's always nice to see new comics :)

thank you for your crit! I actually appriciate it and I'm going to redux the next couple of pages so that it flows better.

Unfortunatly panel design has never been my strong point ^^; but I'm working on it!