Haaa. This is my first ever webcomic! Done with limit supplies! :3 I'm a poor highschool student, so yeah xx;

Right now it's not that far into the story, but it's introducing the main character! At the moment though it's PG 13, as the story moves on it'll change into a more adult rating <3~

Enjoy!

Okay.. I do need some crit, to help me find out what I need to fix and do better :3

Just by looking at it, not reading it, there is far too much white! Work the panels better to fill up more room and add some sort of shading, even if it's just with your pencil.

Alright x3 Yeah I do admit there is far to much white. MSpaint doesn't really offer much for shading x x; But I'll try something different :'D

Tastes like cat people.

Haa..well actually they aren't really cat people. Uhmm..

www.akenotsuki.9.forumer.com

I made that so it can explain the setting and stuff better to people :3

Yea it is a little white. I think the comic needs to 'stick out' more.
Maybe a better font too.

Yes way to much white, I know. I think I might try a another medium...watercolor might be the thing.

Uggh @@; It's so hard to work without photoshop. And I did find a better font to use. Which I'll start using once page seven is up :3