So give the story a read through, tell us what you see and what you think of it.
The tone of the story changes a bit in the second chapter. From the silly silly of the first chapter as the leading lady takes her ship and wanders a bit to a more serious toned silly in the second as it comes out she has a plan and a purpose in the soon to be out third chapter.
We want to know what you think!
BPurk~War
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