In The Solitary Subway

It seems the world had stopped for a moment
Feeling alone in a one constant place
I've been embraced when it is silent
Chills are reaching towards my warm face

And I'm alone...
And I'm alone...
In the center of this world
Still alone...

Motion... has formed so slow, so gratual
The heartbeat of the time it passes by
Unaware masses but things turned to usual
And silent around me had to die

Life is back...
Life is back...
Sudden movements in this world
Became alive...

And I remember you on a tick of a second
When we met once in this cold heartless place
One meeting that I took, could never forget
Froze the world around me in this space

You faded away...
You faded away...
Emotions got to die
Fade away...

And now I close my eyes...

(Solo 1)

Couldn't caught up with you
Imprisoned from a world that always in motion
Destiny left me high and dry
The trains of thoughts seperated our ways

Escape is impossible for me
Everyone comes and goes
But I'm stuck here in this miserable place
But my memories of you remains within me

(Solo 2)

Whoa! Yeah!

Can I leave the sanctuary of this place?
Will I ever stare again at your pretty face?
Are you far away from my ever lonely heart?
ONE! We are... seperated when the worlds departed us

APART

And I'm Alone...
And I'm Alone...
My world left me in the dark
Still alone...

Cannot leave
Forgotten soul
No escape
And heart is still

(Solo 3)

Let the world move before my eyes
As my heart is getting so cold
And here I am, what I would realize
Lonliness with no one to hold

Time is freezing my motions
I may miss you forever
But now, I'm frozen in oceans
My dreams was, you and I together

Cut my movements
Let the world be alive
While I watch passionless
As I have stopped for the world

Hope to be, at least, a memory to you
You will be forever in mine
Missed one ride disbanding a better life
As I stood still in a crowded place eternally

...and I'm stopped...

Three solos? How long do you expect this song to be? Also, it's pretty bland.

lyrics looks ok.

If it got a good tune to it (I expect something that sounds like metallica or slapshock) that can be a themesong for MAG-ISA.

Then again I can't compose for shit and if I did, it would only be the kind where I have to constantly scream just to distract the audience with the hope that they wont notice how bad my song really is. lol!