I hope nobody kills me for posting 8 pages... but this is what I've been working on for the last month (and expect to work for 4-6 months more). Any comments welcome :D

(screwed up a little on the second page, didn't trim according to the right rulers in photoshop and the page came out a bit shorter/narrower).










I'm hoping to finish it before winter :D

cool!
nice sequentials!

Thanks :D

awesome! I think, though, the panel where he says, 'the count is so imperial' the colored-in eyes work a lot better than the shiny, detailed eyes. I like the bug-eyed guy, too.

The hand in the penultimate panel on page 10 is excellent. You also experiment with lots of different angles, which is great.

The guy who says "Yes my lord" (lol kuroshitsuji??) his hairline is a bit funny. I think shorter lines that are closer together (like on his beard/sideburns thing) would look better.

good job!

Kristen Gudsnuk
awesome! I think, though, the panel where he says, 'the count is so imperial' the colored-in eyes work a lot better than the shiny, detailed eyes. I like the bug-eyed guy, too.

I kinda like my detailed eyes... but they don't always survive inking well enough.

Kristen Gudsnuk
The hand in the penultimate panel on page 10 is excellent. You also experiment with lots of different angles, which is great.

I get bored drawing the same people from the same angles and I noticed that I tend to get sloppy when I do that... sooo I try to vary the angles. Not only makes it more fun to draw things, but also helps the page apparently :D

Kristen Gudsnuk
The guy who says "Yes my lord" (lol kuroshitsuji??) his hairline is a bit funny. I think shorter lines that are closer together (like on his beard/sideburns thing) would look better.

Yeeeah... I guess, haha. Too late for that, all pages with him are already drawn :D

Kristen Gudsnuk
good job!

Thanks! :)