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Skullbie
at 10:40AM, Jan. 13, 2010
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I was trying to go really animu with the style here. Not too happy with how the tones turned out, but with any luck i'll actually finish this ones story @_@
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:48PM
Ironscarf
at 2:43PM, Jan. 13, 2010
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Like it a lot - the tones look good too. I really like the slightly unusual viewpoint of the establishing shot; it draws me in, but then the last panel makes me wonder if you're just trying to avoid drawing down to street level so you can skip cars, people, dogs etc!
But I know the next page will have a panoramic street scene(!), so you can ignore the last comment. It's beautifully done: the only thing you look slightly less confident on is the guys right hand holding the letter.
But I know the next page will have a panoramic street scene(!), so you can ignore the last comment. It's beautifully done: the only thing you look slightly less confident on is the guys right hand holding the letter.
And if only fools are kind, Ozone,
Then I guess it's wise to be cruel.
And if life belongs only to the strong, Ozone,
What will you lend on an old golden rule?
Then I guess it's wise to be cruel.
And if life belongs only to the strong, Ozone,
What will you lend on an old golden rule?
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:02PM
Jemelis
at 12:46PM, Jan. 14, 2010
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That's very, very nice. Clean and nicely laid out.
Laura Melis
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:07PM
I Am The 1337 Master
at 1:37PM, Jan. 14, 2010
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ditto. good work. :)
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:53PM
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