Silent narrative about a boy who goes to the Mall with his mother. He becomes immersed in fear when she suddenly disappears mysteriously, and everything is not as it once was.
Updates are twice weekly. Would appreciate a response because I have no idea how to get folks to look at my work. So much traffic passes us by on these types of sites without so much as a sideways glance.
I guess we're all in the same boat in that respect.
Peace. http://www.drunkduck.com/Mall_aise/index.php?p=713462
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
(PLUG/CRIT)Mall-aise: A trip to the Mall turns into a psychologial nightmare for a child.
fladam
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Reinderdijkhuis
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That last page is fantastic. Well done, that. That's a high standard of comics lay-out even if it looks like just another grid. It USES the grid.
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elektro
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I too also like the payout of the last page, but the deviantArt watermark kind of ruins it. Is there a copy of that page without it?
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Chernobog
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I think it's pretty good... ambient, even. I can actually relate to this one so far.
"You tell yourself to just
enjoy the process," he added. "That whether you succeed or fail, win or
lose, it will be fine. You pretend to be Zen. You adopt detachment, and
ironic humor, while secretly praying for a miracle."
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fladam
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Greetings and thanks. The Deviant Art logo has been vanquished. Thanks for taking the time to have a look.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Mall_aise/index.php?p=713462
http://www.drunkduck.com/Mall_aise/index.php?p=713462
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