yeah, my 2nd time posting here XP hoping someone will answer this time that my DD rank is around 150 >.<
so, yeah, I suppose the premise of this story is fate... soulmates can't help but be together, no matter what happens (ya'll know the story of Wuthering Heights and Romeo and Juliet I'm SURE) so relationships are rather corrupted and depraved and don't forget reincarnation and past life memories!
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
(PLUG/CRIT) it's a twisted love story with fantasy aspects... M-rated warning
flyingwind66
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mishi_hime
at 4:52AM, Jan. 5, 2008
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No one wants to be the critic. Okay. I'll be the one to receive all the hate.here we go.
+PROS
#Varied shapes of panels are nice. Looks like what most printed manga i've seen looks like.
#The writing is good and holds my interest. You're good at breaking it up and placing it in your comic.
#Effects are nice. it's obvious you pay attention to them
#Skill you can definitely digital edit, i think you should try new digital techniques at every opportunity because photoshop (or whatever you use) is your strength. And will set your comic apart. Let's face it you are good at it so push that strength so far that it's just a slap in the face to everyone else.
#Your characters have a lot of look. I like them -however i think you could have just a a little bit more detail to them.
#The html and layout are all beautiful and unique and further proof that you know graphics like the back of your hand.
-CONS
# Please tell me, that on your colored chapter page that you did not use crayons. Because that's what it looks like. omg :/
#Backgrounds....there arent any! And no, shading doesn't count. Okay, I know you can draw, so don't be lazy when it comes to backgrounds. It makes you look horribly lazy and absolutely ruins your opportunity to show depth. I notice you have background elements, but i don't think it's enough.
OVERALL Sometimes the characters or the background make your page look a little......plain. You really need to push your skills because i'm certain you have a lot more talent then you're comic shows. I think you and I are exactly the same in that respect. You need to photoshop your heart out until you can't photoshop anymore.
+PROS
#Varied shapes of panels are nice. Looks like what most printed manga i've seen looks like.
#The writing is good and holds my interest. You're good at breaking it up and placing it in your comic.
#Effects are nice. it's obvious you pay attention to them
#Skill you can definitely digital edit, i think you should try new digital techniques at every opportunity because photoshop (or whatever you use) is your strength. And will set your comic apart. Let's face it you are good at it so push that strength so far that it's just a slap in the face to everyone else.
#Your characters have a lot of look. I like them -however i think you could have just a a little bit more detail to them.
#The html and layout are all beautiful and unique and further proof that you know graphics like the back of your hand.
-CONS
# Please tell me, that on your colored chapter page that you did not use crayons. Because that's what it looks like. omg :/
#Backgrounds....there arent any! And no, shading doesn't count. Okay, I know you can draw, so don't be lazy when it comes to backgrounds. It makes you look horribly lazy and absolutely ruins your opportunity to show depth. I notice you have background elements, but i don't think it's enough.
OVERALL Sometimes the characters or the background make your page look a little......plain. You really need to push your skills because i'm certain you have a lot more talent then you're comic shows. I think you and I are exactly the same in that respect. You need to photoshop your heart out until you can't photoshop anymore.
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:03PM
flyingwind66
at 7:31PM, Jan. 5, 2008
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yay thanks for the crit! it makes me happy XD I KNOW I'm lazy with my backgrounds X.x it's an effect for when they are in the dream-like astral realm/state-ness but elsewhere *sigh >.>
erm... chapter 3? that wasn't crayon... it was pencil-crayon XP I've seen some pretty amazing stuff done with pencil crayon... unfortunately it's not a medium I use often... basically I wanted to use a different medium/technique for every chapter title page... I'm planning on a watercolors title page and an oil paint page (and both of them I'm way better at than pencil crayon XD)
*sits and waits for more crits
erm... chapter 3? that wasn't crayon... it was pencil-crayon XP I've seen some pretty amazing stuff done with pencil crayon... unfortunately it's not a medium I use often... basically I wanted to use a different medium/technique for every chapter title page... I'm planning on a watercolors title page and an oil paint page (and both of them I'm way better at than pencil crayon XD)
*sits and waits for more crits
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:30PM
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