Heaven vs Hell is the name of the comic. uh... please check it out.

JPEGs don't suit your comic. Use PNGs instead.

Hard to judge a comic by just two pages.....

But yeah, use GIF instead of JPG..

OK, I'll see how other formats look.

....I really think I need more constructive criticism. The people who have left comments on my comic seem too nice.

I think the reason there isnt alot of criticism here is that there is nothing that imidiatley stands out as bad or good, this comic is generally inoffensive to look at, but not grabbing enough to invoke a real response from people.

Mimarin
I think the reason there isnt alot of criticism here is that there is nothing that imidiatley stands out as bad or good, this comic is generally inoffensive to look at, but not grabbing enough to invoke a real response from people.

.....ok... uh... what?

I was refering to why not alot have people have commented here dispite sprite comics even getting alot of advice comments and/or blatant abuse.

Oh. But when I said comment, I was referring to the comments on the pages and how everyone but one person gave it a perfect score. I mean, I like the scores and all, but my comic's not perfect. Seriously, how do I improve when people don't point out what I'm lacking. I'm not nearly self-aware enough to find all the flaws.

As for the Sprite Comic thing, when people think of sprite comics, they usually think of game graphics, so I'm not really sure if alot of people really had noticed that my comic is, technically, a sprite one.

Of course... I also can't much criticism without any readers...

I'm bumping this topic up. Hurray for obnoxious, in-your-face advertising!

LIZARD_B1TE
I'm bumping this topic up. Hurray for obnoxious, in-your-face advertising!

Don't. It's a blatant violation of the forum guidelines.

lukee

LIZARD_B1TE
I'm bumping this topic up. Hurray for obnoxious, in-your-face advertising!

Don't. It's a blatant violation of the forum guidelines.

....It is? Oh sorry. I guess I didn't rules thoroughly enough.

Not catchy..artwork is worse than mine ..which says alot :shock:
I'll see if the plot is good later . Gd luck with the comic

It's been about a month, so I am bumping this topic back up to the top. OK? Good.

so, there's HVH, and then there's my new comic. The Adventures of Grim and Bob. Both links in my signature. So check them out.