So yup, I originally started this comic around 5th or 6th grade, while watching Happy tree friends and thought that i could spin it a little using superheros and villains. Shortly after i came up with a rabble of characters in chibi form (super deformed for those who don't know)but then it sort got thinner and thinner. Around the end of 9th grade i decided to bring them all back in a true normal form. The story was on www.freewebs.com/blackmantis along with all the back round information and stuff. Basically the comic is about the struggle of good and evil from the point of the baddies, the first couple of comics were a little scratchy but as I understand photoshop more I assume I get better. After comic 17 i kick off into timewarp which was a school project. Time warp is just there to stall for time so I can complete pages 18-20 after and beyond.

-Enjoy the comic Michael Plondaya the Blackmantis
XOXOXO

my bad heres the link
http://www.drunkduck.com/Villans_Untld/index.php

Generally i like it, the Story is quite entertaining.
The main problem for me are the lead characters and the way they look. They have that generic manga look about them and that isnt very interesting.

Like this page:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Villans_Untld/index.php?p=93759

You have some pages where there are some interesting bad guys and characters. Art that looks very nice and cool looking.
Like this page:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Villans_Untld/index.php?p=87640

Its when we get back to the main characters with their big eyes and wide mouth you lose it. Sadly.