Please come check out my new comic Sol and Luna. It's really really really long, so i figured i should warn you. Right now it's about 25 pages long and has 25 to go. (It's a good story i promise!!!)
I would really like for people to check it out.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Sol_and_Luna/index.php?p=241804

that starts at the cover and then you can work your way through.
Thanks a lot

(with a forum name like that, i kinda hope mommy puts my pretty picture on the fridge. XP )

AWWW come on! No one has even posted a reply here. *sniff sniff* lol

It's cool actually, this is lame but i'm posting in my own space ><

Sorry, but no one ever really posts in any thrends in the " Hey Everyone Look What I Did!" Forum. As a matter of fact, I don't think I've ever seen a thrend with two pages here...

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Sorry, but no one ever really posts in any thrends in the " Hey Everyone Look What I Did!" Forum. As a matter of fact, I don't think I've ever seen a thrend with two pages here...

Yes, it is a shame... You have to have ultimate patience with this site, and just keep going until you get your readers!

My first impressions of the comic are... You have a VERY bright scanner! So much so that it seems as though the male character in the first panel is simply a floating head, and the pseech bubbles are very hard to see. It may be an idea to simply grab a black pen and shade using full black instead. That way, everything can be seen, even in such harsh light.

Also, work on your drawing skill. It may be worth investing in some 'How to Draw' books to study from.

Furthermore, your panel set outs are good - the perspective in the final panel is well done, where you can only see the person's mouth - but make sure you don't draw them all clustered together. Try to draw boxes separate from each other, not just lines across the page.

Well, keep up the good work, and I hope you get more attention soon. :3