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(plug / crit) fcubed
fac3 at 9:19PM, June 28, 2009
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Hello all,

recently started a comic here at DD. I've been posting on and off at the drunkduck for the past 6 years or so (with many years of dormancy in between). Anyway this is my latest (and most serious) attempt and I'm always looking for feedback. Feel free to tear it apart.

This comic is a personal project for the most part. It's an experiment, and I want people to question, disagree, criticize, etc.

A brief description:
fcubed - Margot is stuck somewhere between a sorry reality and her own disillusioned thoughts.

Starts here:
http://www.drunkduck.com/fcubed/index.php?p=574561

-fac3
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:25PM
SlideStudios at 5:56AM, June 29, 2009
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awesome comic, love the art.
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:48PM
DoOomcat at 6:33AM, June 29, 2009
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I get that it's part of the style but the word balloon placement is annoying, and tends to create tangents. I think your drawing style is interesting, but the expressions are the same over and over and different girls look the same except for their hair styles so when there's a cu, I'm not sure who's talking? I can really appreciate your take on comics though, it's just not for me.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:13PM
fac3 at 8:14AM, June 29, 2009
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slidestudios - thanks

dooomcat - thanks, you're actually the first person to point out those issues. I'm well aware (and even self conscious of) the expression thing, although it's a character thing as well. No one's mentioned not knowing who's speaking at any given moment, so that's good to know too.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:25PM

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