http://www.drunkduck.com/Henry_the_heathen/ its my comics, for now it has only 15 pages, but im working on it.Suggestions,comments ,critic or something like that :D would be nice :D and English is not my 1st language so there could be some mistakes in the speech bubbles.

Storyline has potential from what I could piece together. There are some blatant proportion issues in some of the comics, so be careful on that. I do think you're pacing the comic a bit too fast though based on everything you're explaining in the author comments. If you slow the pacing down, you should be able to let your comic do the talking and not the author box.

Nice effects on those last two pages BTW.