Hello everybody, I'm Glochma. I've loved doing comics for about 5 years now, and through drunkduck I've wanted to get maybe some constructive criticism, for I'm serious about this comic and hope to one day publish it.

I'm still redoing the first 15 or so pages, so the pages get better throughout the ones that I have, which is about 54 or 55 at the moment.


The story is about a man who is convicted of killing his wife in a devastating car crash, and is thrown in jail, even if he didn't actually mean to. When he escapes from prison, from fear of being put on death row for something he didn't do, he mingles with a strange goth woman who's desperately trying to play music to support herself and her abusive boyfriend. Together, they discover that life is hard, but it's a journey everyone has to face, and that you'll never be alone.

I'm on deviantART and Drunk Duck, so I hope you enjoy my comic! Peace.

http://glochma.deviantart.com/gallery/27120911

http://www.drunkduck.com/Pulled_Strings/index.php?p=777544

The art is good but earlier pages don't flow very well.
It could also really do with more for establishing scenes, at the beginning it is hard to tell what and where things are happening. Once she ends up back at home it gets better.

Then you have a bunch of broken pages due to the ducks issues so you will need to re upload those.