User: Collossus		5
dont have much space as a border between the pictures. -Posted on Jul 26, 2007

User: slipknot kid
shisno i will send you a pq no need for email adress -Posted on Jul 12, 2007

User: manOfd3m0nsPie
Much better then last time but me don'ts got the Freeman sorry. -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: gamemaster		4
here's gamemaster!!!! sorry. i am camping and i had tradel geting the wifi up. any who..... the first sprie is not goku it's gotanks. thats it. it graet. i like it. -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: shisno15
MUTED -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: slipknot kid
i will not be able to update for a while going on vacation shisno any updates you can do in that time wil help ty -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: slipknot kid
o also i will change the first square right now. -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: slipknot kid
you make some good points well 1st i really have no good backgrounds (cant find any good 1's). and i was thinking about the style thing i really dont know how it will turn out yet i am kinda using this comic as a test run it, after all, is my first. and ty for assisting in my comic whenever you can make a update would be great i am looking forwars to it so whenever is fine ty. -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: shisno15
The sprites themselves look better (except for pannel one). But you don't use any zoom effects to show close up action and the background is awfull. I'll assist, but you said Sonic in the comic. It's not a bad idea but if you introduce all the characters in the beginning it's no fun to write later. Also like I said about style, a Pokemon Advance sprite fighting a DBZ GB sprite doesn't match... at all. It would look like crap. Find one style of sprites and make the rest in that style. I'm not a spriteing machine so I will not be able to make them all. And, do you want me to do an update any-time soon? -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: slipknot kid
oo ya also do you like the changes i made be honest. ty -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: slipknot kid
really whatever you want i could use more sprites and i am thinking of adding sonic into the war which you would know alot about. really anything you can do to help as my current assistant does sigh... nothing -Posted on Jul 11, 2007

User: shisno15
What do I have to do if I assist? -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: slipknot kid
wow very nice i am working on this page right now hey can you be my assistant maybe you seem to know what you are talking about and i like your sonic comic, also it is a message from a mystery person to earth and all the heroes. -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: shisno15
Here is something I whipped up really fast to give you a little advice on what to do (all done in paint, cause I assume that's what you are using.) -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: manOfd3m0nsPie		4
Dude! Dude! Get Half Life sprites on this! I'll get them for you if you want! P13~~~~!!!1111 -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: shisno15
Also when it says to Earth, is it supposed to be from Earth. Or does Kai have a message from himself to earth. -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: slipknot kid
ya i am kinda new to this so thx shisno also cell is in like 1 stance the whole time cause i had crapy sprites in the last to boxes he looks better. -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: Vindibudd
Teleporting never works for me. -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: Vindibudd		5
Teleporting never works for me. -Posted on Jul 10, 2007

User: shisno15
This comic would be a hell of a lot better if it was all in one style instead of mixing games that don't go together. That may require makeing some edited sprites but it will look better in the end. Like Cell doesn't match Goku's style at all and he is in like, one pose. Also so action to match your words would be good. I'll show you what I mean later. -Posted on Jul 10, 2007