cross over fusion (cloud vs axel)

cross over fusion

joraoflite

ok here i remade my kingdom hearts cross fusion with bleach this one will many new character and not to tell like most of the final fantasy charcter will be in the sprite comic so this is part1 i hope you guy enjoy it and please leave your comments once done reading.

-Posted on Jul 11, 2008

User: SquishyNinja 3

Too...much...empty...space...
awkwardness...level s...rising...
-Posted on Dec 17, 2008

User: kiddi 5

-Posted on Jul 24, 2008

User: Blacksuit Sora 3

Pretty good, better than last time the wording makes it confusing as there are plenty of run ons but you're getting better. There is still white space though.
-Posted on Jul 11, 2008

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