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Jun 12,`09 8:58pm | Quote |

Yeah. It's called The Science of Magic, and it's an Urban Fantasy. My main goal was mixing magic and technology and seeing what would happen. The plot centers around a spellcaster named Erik Weiss, who is nearly killed one day, and sets out to track down his attacker. This somehow leads to him being involved in a power struggle in the magical government.

It can be viewed here: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/seann_barbour/the-science-of-magic/chapter/1

New chapter every week, though I have yet to decide on a regular day. Currently, there are 11 chapters.

Constructive Criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you.


 
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Oct 21,`09 6:37am | Quote |

Not that bad. It looks like that it is going to turn out to have a "Rick Riordan" feel to it-in the "OK. Wrong spell." part. One thing I will say is that that was a small first chapter-possibly because it was a prolouge. It is a modern fantasy...yes. I would like to see more of it, hopefully you will release them soon?

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Oct 21,`09 10:30pm | Quote |

i'm writing a web cereal novel. It's called Not Candy, Reese's Puffs Cereal.

DO YOU SEE WHERE I'M COMIN' FROM, YOU JIVE MOTHAFUCKAAAA-AAAAAAAAA!?

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