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Mar 15,`09 6:12pm | Quote |

...just lookin' for some feedback on my comic here on drunkduck http://www.drunkduck.com/obscene_cuisine/
It's content is def. mature in nature.

Thanks

 
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Mar 21,`09 9:40am | Quote |

Just added a new page.

 
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Mar 28,`09 6:13am | Quote |

New page just added. Still waiting on some [CRIT]. It's all good! I remain optimistic. Did I mention my comic contains strong language and adult themes? Huh...? huh...?

 
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Mar 28,`09 11:08am | Quote |

I really liked this comic, it doesent alienate people who havent experienced the food industry from that point of view, a couple jokes where a bit hit and miss for me, but i like random shock humour, overall very funny! some rants seemed a little long winded but most of them were pretty funny, also a very neat proffesional looking style to the art, something that looks similar to a comic you would find in a newspaper... only funny! I strongly recomend people read this comic!
It's nice to see a comic like this, i used to work at macdonalds (obviously no comparison to a proper restaurant!) and we always hated the management, fooled around, and hated those stupid posters encouraging peole to work at such a ghastly place, so it was nice to see someone who hit upon those aspects of working life as well as this! most comics i've seen about work tend to be "managers are lame! thats the joke!" but this comic is very original.

 
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Mar 28,`09 5:18pm | Quote |

WOW! Thank you for the honest and fair critique! I really appreciate it. Especially from someone as talented as yourself.
"Long winded"...'sigh' I know. I get that from my Dad. You have no idea. Believe me!
Moreover thank you for regarding my art as professional grade, or something you might find in a "newspaper". I am a cook ( as I've stated numerous times in the past) with no art training to speak of. That was just about the highest praise I could have ever dreamed of receiving.
Thank you!

Macdonalds, eh? Did you ever see The Chapelle Show parody of those ads? WacArnolds? It's great!

 
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Mar 29,`09 5:11am | Quote |

Obscene Cuisine is a funny webcomic, even the rants are mostly funny which is rare for a rant. I kind of agree with saillestraife about the art being newspaper quality, although I'd think it would be much more suited at place in mad magazine or a simillar publication. Overall it is a very good comic, there is really nothing bad I can say about it.

 
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Mar 29,`09 11:05am | Quote |

you're veryu welcome! you have a great comic!

 
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Apr 6,`09 4:42pm | Quote |

I've been featured! But, you probably knew that already. I'm still lookin'for some honest [CRIT]. My comic should be pretty easy to find now. Hope you like it.

 
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Apr 10,`09 10:07pm | Quote |

I read through it the other day (just the comics, still have to go read the rants) and I really liked it. Coming from a family of hard workers (forestry and mechanics), I somehow connected to it in a way. The style, the use of characters and the story are well played, and enjoyable. For me, I can't stick to comics that act like e-books. I mean that one submission is one page.

I can't listen to a story that needs your attention over a vast amount of time. That's why I like comic strips. Newcomers don't have to go back to page one to understand what's up or lose track of what's going on. That's me though.

To put it short, I really like Obscene Cuisine. I even favorited it. You have a really nice piece of work that has been featured (how I came across it) and I wish you the best with it.

 
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Apr 11,`09 9:21am | Quote |

Thanks. The whole point of my comic is to kind of ease the sting of everyone busting their ass out there. Even though it takes place in a restaurant (it's pretty much all I know), I had hoped that it would transcend into other hard working folks lives. That was great to read! Thanks again!

I just added a new page today.

...hope you dig it.


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