Hello, I'm a newbie here XD
please check out my webcomic, Cuervo de Caza

I like that you do backgrounds!
You draw backgrounds! And cars! And I can totally tell what's going on in each panel!
That's awesome :D
I also like the whole urban/delinquent theme you've got going on.

BUT! You said crit was allowed, and I do have some little nitpicks to make.
Your faces could use a little tweaking. The crow, the hawk and the girl look too much alike. Maybe someone has a pointed chin, but they can't all be so alike.
Another nitpick would be...your pages need more black. Or grey. Or screentoning.
So much white makes it look like the characters are in this vaaaaast empty spaces.

I'm nagging you about those little things because everything else looks so right. Like page 8. I really like page 8! And the first page, the backgrounds looked very good there! There are a lot of good things about Cuervo de Caza (hey, hablas español, o es solo el título de la historia? )

I think this comic can totally grow into awesomness, so keep up the good work.

It seems quite interesting so far. I really like that everything is very clear. It's not too cluttered, but it also has a good amount of detail and ambiance to it.
Your lines are very nice and smooth, I love smooth lines.

My crit would be that you should probably fix up your text. It doesn't really match being all pixely in such a smoothly drawn comic. Another thing would be is the grammar. It's not horrific, but there are some things in there that could be tweaked.

But the one thing that I think should definitely be addressed is the characters. It's obvious who's the main characters as they are "beautiful" like in all anime. While the side characters are the only ones who are average looking. But what I mean to say is, they look the exact same. This looks like a really good comic, but I don't want it to have a fallout like a lot of anime/manga where all the characters look the exact same with the only differentiating traits such as hair and eye colour. Maybe try rounding a face, or maybe smaller eyes, a different shaped nose. You can do all of these things and still keep the prettiness of your characters, you can just tell them apart now.

Other than that, it looks good and I'll keep an eye on it.

Re: Ludeshka
wow, thank you for the comments and crit!^^
I'll try to impove my comic's quality...(especially my english lol)
yup, I have changed the deisgn for the "hawk", I hope that he wouldn't be the same as the main character again

eh? no, I don't speak Spanish, it's just the title

Re:Freegurt
yup! I had tweaked the text
oh yeah! Thx for the suggestion! I'll try drawing characters with more different style XD
thank you very much for the comment!
and sorry for the bad english XD


update - page 17
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