http://www.drunkduck.com/Galactic_Wastelanders/

I've always wanted to try out creating a more story-driven comic, so I did. Galactic Wastelanders is a Sci-Fi/Adventure comic about two persons - each from a different part of a galaxy - and their story as they travel the galaxy to shape a saga of their own.

Any comments or feedback would be appreciated.

Can't really draw too much out of a single page.

I'm not the one either to critique your artwork. I'm definitely more talented at the writing end of the spectrum. It's hard to get a grasp of the flow of your writing with this single page.

Positives that I can see so far are easy to read text bubbles with a font that isn't difficult to see. The addition of color also amps it up compared to the hoardes of B&W on this website.

The only negative in the writing thus far is on the bottom right panel. It says "You could with something." I don't understand what you're trying to say. It could be that I'm just misinterpreting what he's trying to say, or it may be a typo. Clarifying your writing to mean exactly what you mean makes it much easier on the readers.

Hey, thanks for the feedback!

Making the comic atheistically pleasing with colors, easily readable text and all that was a small goal along the way - nice to know that so far it's been successful. Guess there's really not much to say about the story already after the first page, bu that'll probably change a bit further out as the whole thing develops. As for the slightly hard to interpret sentence in the last frame, I have a bad habit from time to time to take use of various idioms in the dialogue, so some of the phrases may take a second glance to get (in this case he's speaking about grabbing a pick-me-up, which will probably become clear in the upcoming page).

Bump! New page out!