Just thought I would put up a plug for my new comic Iron and Water! I am much more excited about this comic!! There aren't too many completed pages yet, but it will get moving quickly I am hoping! ^_^

Check it out to see what it is all about!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Iron_and_Water/

Interesting halftones. I like the lighing of page 2. You should be careful about the tones getting to noticeable, though. I'd suggest working at double or 150% finished size, then shrinking it (save it in greyscale). You might want to try out using a thicker line on the shadowed side of objects and characters.
This looks interesting, though you really should post a whole chapter at once to start (most people won't get into the story with just two pages and a cover). I've added this to my favourites (browser, not DD), just so you know.

Thank you for the suggestions! This will help out a lot. Yea, I should have posted a whole chapter first...maybe I will make several pages then post them all at once...Well, thanks for the view!!

I just posted a new character page.

Another page up today!

Another page up!!

Just thought I would bump again, and say that I have put a few more pages up!

Just thought I would give this another bump so it gets more views. I am in the top 250 comics!! Yay. ^_^ Thanks to everyone who has favorited Iron and Water and commented! I really appreciate any input, and I will listen!! XD

OMG another bump...