I'm currently working on a book, but I'm having trouble figuring out the best way to approach things in order to make things flow properly. I would like to reserve a chapter specifically for telling a story/having a flashback of what happened a certain amount of years ago, but I'm not sure if this would be good. What do you think?
My main thing is that I do not want to confuse the reader, so that's why I wanted to have a 'flashback chapter.' but is there a more effective way of getting the point across without doing this and not confusing the reader?
What I've done so far in Act I was introduce some of the main characters, including the hero of the story, but he's a baby now. The other main characters talk about things that happend in the past and mention certain important key names which is relevant to the story. The chapter ends on a good note.
So what I wanted to do was to have Act II explain what the two main characters were talking about and more importantly, -who- they were talking about. I was going to do this using narrations mostly, and have a sort of 'storybook' feeling to it.
Then in Act III, I was going to skip the story ahead a few years when the hero grows up and the story continues from there..
So is this an effective way of doing things or is there a better way to make things flow? I just have this weird feeling that something's not right about doing it this way, and I didn't want to start drawing until I'm absolutely sure. Thanks in advance
Best thing is to make an eased transition into the flashback. Any flashback strips I've done have also been accompanied by a sepia tone so it's obvious the sequence is in the past.
Heya! Thanks so much for the reply!
Well, the comic is in black and white with screentones. I'm just wondering if it's more effective to have a whole chapter dedicated to the flashback, or have little bits and pieces of the flashback throughout the story or if there's another more efective way to do it in order to make the story flow well.
My main worry is that I'm going to confuse the reader, so I'm trying to put myself in the reader's shoes and figure out what is the best way to get the point across while still allowing the story to flow well.
I would trust your instincts Knuckles; they're often right. If you've set up an intro that makes the reader want to know more of what's going on, then you probably don't want to explain it all in chapter two! If it's crucial to the development of the story, you probably want to reveal things gradually as you go along, to keep the reader guessing and if it's background story, you probably don't want to halt the plot to devote a whole chapter to it.
It's difficult without seeing what you've done so far, but general advice might be to keep things moving along, introducing flashbacks from time to time when it's appropriate (one of the characters is dreaming about past events - two characters are discussing past events or whatever you can come up with!) and when it advances the plot. Trust your readers to stick with it and want to know more. The trick is to give us enough to care, but not so much that we don't feel the need to come back for more.
Thanks for the insight! I guess I will have to rework the script a bit then, so I can gradually give the reader spurts of the flashback. I just don't want to get the reader confused and frustrated halfway through then just end up losing interest altogether. I've read plenty of comics and such which had me very confused, and I just don't want to fall into those same pitfalls of making a good comic book story.
A flashback serves more than just the purpose of relating background history. It can be used to connect scenes set in the present, through camera trick transitions, through theme, through the narrator/character's frame of mind and POV, etc.
So when you 'exhaust' all of your flashback material in 1 stand-alone chapter, you may be 'wasting' your good supply of flashbacks which could come in handy later on as connecting/pacing material.
Also, a good thing about flashbacks being disconnected from current chronology is that you can arrange them however you like, for the sake of being dramatic. When you're drawing a story happening in the present, you can't skip around chronologically... jump from Monday to Thursday back to Wednesday... But you're not limited when showing flashbacks in spurts. But you will be limited this way if you set the flashback as a stand-alone chapter.
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I did an "embedded back story". I just plonked it in at the end of a major sequence. It was there to show some more aspects of the character, explain some things about her, to set up some things for future stories, and allow for a change of pace. It seemed to work nicely. the only transition I had was the cover and some narration at the start- that wasn't for the purpose of transition though, that was just pat of that story chapter.
I've done it both ways. I write things from a character perspective, so there's always a lead in (starting with a thought bubble or something). In one case, a character told a story of something that happened long ago, which lasted two chapters. It was a fun change of mood and pace. I loved writing it, and my readers enjoyed it too. Most of the time, though, I use flashback sequences just a few pages long that cover one conversation or conflict. (This is how "real" memories work. And I tell my story very present day, so someone has to be initiating the memory. I don't just write about the past with no trigger.)
I don't think either cause too much confusion. It helps to have a good lead in (even a note at the top of the page: "17 Years ago..." or on the first page of the chapter) and some format changes signifying that it's a flashback (make the scenes a shade darker, use different fonts, etc.). Also make a reference or two in the dialogue that sets up the timeline ( "I can't believe we've been married for two years." ) and draw your characters younger looking, different clothes/hair but with some recognizable features.
I used to not do a format difference (I draw in B&W), but my readers had a better reaction when I started making the flashback panels a shade darker than the present-day stuff.
Basically, like everyone else has said, go with your instincts and tell the story in a way that feels natural. If it seems abrupt or out-of-place, then try a different way.
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