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Sep 28,`08 4:16am | Quote |

NoCharCom

http://drunkduck.com/nocharcom

I have wanted to start a webcomic for years, but could never find an artist to work with. That hasn't changed but I've decided to go ahead anyway. This is a daily comic on Love, life and two voices coming from nowhere.

Think every other gamer comic but without stick figures.

Oh and I'm Australian.

Yes I do want critique of my writing. I'm obviously aware that my comic is pretty much just two disembodied voices and that is not up for criticism until I find an artist with which I can start another project.

Check out the home of nocharcom at http://websinthe.blogspot.com
or check out my writing at http://kieran-tales.blogspot.com

This post was last edited on Sep 28,`08 4:17am

Check out the home of nocharcom at websinthe.blogspot.com
or check out my writing at kieran-tales.blogspot.com
 
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Oct 1,`08 3:47am | Quote |

The jokes are quite witty and i think this comic woul be quite popular, if it had even the most simple kind of art. People on a website such as DrunkDuck are here for a mix of pictures/art and dialogue/text. Although you deliver the latter, your comic really suffers from a lack of the former.

Don't just write yourself off as an artist... Even if stick figures is all you can do, do it! Add some colour, add some shapes. Try it.

Heck, I would even draw a simple sketch for you, just to show you how easy it is... I'm guessing computers isn't exactly your weak side, so I'll leave the editing with you, if you want to give it a shot...

This post was last edited on Oct 1,`08 3:48am

 
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Oct 6,`08 3:20am | Quote |

Hehe, thanks for that and I really appreciate the positive feedback. I appreciate it to the point where I have actually just spent some time creating the first graphics for the comic, something I wasn't going to do for another couple of months.

The new look comic should be make it's debut on the 20th.

Check out the home of nocharcom at websinthe.blogspot.com
or check out my writing at kieran-tales.blogspot.com
 
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Oct 8,`08 7:16pm | Quote |

Hi again Dotless, I just wanted to thank you again for pushing me towards putting some artwork in my comic. I've started using stick figures and I've never had so much fun writing comics. It's been a blast working out how I want things to look and developing a formula.

I must admit that my writing has taken a serious hit, and I think that not using art is an extremely powerful way of developing your writing.

The new comic format starts on the 20th of this month. There were some teething problems in the first few days of using art but I think it's starting to settle down (I write 2-3 weeks in advance).

Email me at websinthe@gmail.com if you want an exclusive preview.

Check out the home of nocharcom at websinthe.blogspot.com
or check out my writing at kieran-tales.blogspot.com

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